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Due to their use of bright colors on T-shirts and their stubbly party-guy image, many metalheads choose to lump the Black Dahlia Murder in with the modern deathcore and melodic hardcore bands strewn throughout the scene. This has always perplexed me—the band’s musical output has always been heavily steeped in melodic Swedish death metal like Dismember, At The Gates, and Darkane, and their song subjects have always related to the unholy trinity of metal themes: death, monsters, and the Devil. The latter aspect has always been something I’ve admired in the band, and that many overlook in favor of casting the Black Dahlia Murder in some stupid br00tal light. Not only is the band’s music insane and infectious, but the lyrics of BDM vocalist Trevor Strnad are also undeniably poetic, evocative, and relatable. I fucking love this band, and their lyrics are what turned me from a fan to a devotee.
My appreciation for Strnad’s lyrics wasn’t truly cemented until I read the booklet for 2007’s Nocturnal, so let’s start there. The opening track, “Everything Went Black”, describes a pool of living shadow slowly absorbing reality. On the second verse, Strnad shrieks:
Streetlights bend into the void, cars enveloped whole
Darkness deeper than a blind man’s sleep, soon the paint the world
Insatiable in hunger, it drinks the sea without a belch
Stretching to the other side, where it is sure to meet itself
Hot damn. Strnad’s description of the blackness as “deeper than a blind man’s sleep” displays a Dickensian level of hyperbole, and his illustration of the darkness absorbing the oceans “without a belch: is both oddly human and vastly alien. The final line poses a metaphysical concept that’s beyond cool—that eventually, oblivion reaches oblivion.
On Nocturnal’s title track, which is ostensibly about the universal cabal of the vampire, Strnad continues with his incredible yet indirect descriptions of unholy phenomena:
Parchments scabbed over with plasmatic prose
Prophesize permanent night
The waves of sheer blackness paint ebony my soul
And bestow me with infernal might
The alliterative use of ‘p’ words here is incredible, and literary enough, but it’s also the descriptive language that elevates these lyrics above others—prose being scabbed onto a page like gore paints an incredible depiction of an ancient vampiric tome. More so, the flowery language here suits the song’s characters. Who says “ebony” instead of “black”? Fucking vampires, that’s who.
Something I love about the Black Dahlia Murder is their ability to make horror fresh again. Many of these songs are about the same subject matter as Misfits tunes, but with the injection of the band’s acrobatic hyper-thrash and Strnad’s incredible lyrics, these old-school House of Hammer subjects are brought back to new, urgent, modern life. From “Moonlight Equilibrium” off of 2011’s Ritual, a song about werewolves:
A code embedded deep within
Encrypted in vaults of bone and skin
A tug magnetic toward the dark
The wolf, voracious, hath witnessed its mark
It’s obvious what this song is about, but there’s no bullshit here about a man being pure of heart and saying his prayers at night, or about howling or whatever. There are instead references to the moon’s magnetic effects on the earth, on genetic codes being brought to life. During the refrain, when Strnad says, “We’re all but beasts that hunger from inside”, he brings the werewolf to very human, very real life, relating its condition to our own.
Another solid example of the band’s lyrics rejuvenating old horror stories is in “The Grave Robber’s Work”:
So I’ve clipped a few fingers off to get the gold for which I lust
From the dead man’s bank and trust to the gates of Hell or bust
The blackened bits of exhumed evidenceEmbedded ‘neath my fettered fingernails
It’s but a smallish part of what our dirty work entails
Come dance with meThis graveyard planet that you’ve called Earth
You hold in such a high regard
It’s but as worthless as a turd
Will you follow me into the dark?
Three things make these lyrics awesome. First, there’s the detailed description of the grave robber’s trade—clipping off digits to get rings, for example. Next, there’s the use of language befitting the time of professional grave robbing, phrases like “‘neath” and “but as worthless”. And finally, the last four lines get into the mind of our protagonist, displaying the disgust one feels at seeing upturned noses and lavish finery when he knows deep down that he’ll be prying all of your valuables off of your rotting husk.
A final horror lyric from the Black Dahlia Murder that I’d like to look at is the chorus of “A Shrine To Madness”, a song about Halloween:
Here, in the season of the dead
Sanity hangs by a thread
We’re descendants of the dark
Give us back our one true love
Manifest All Hallow’s Eve
Samhain grim, our one true love
No, you shan’t kill Halloween
For we’ve bore it in our blood
A tradition upheld against the march of normalcy, celebrating shadow and insanity—Halloween has never sounded truer.
Let’s close with a little talk about trueness. Though their lyrical focus often leans more towards the bizarre and macabre than the truly genocidal, the Black Dahlia Murder has always upheld a certain level of blasphemy in their music. Though one might expect them to raise aloft a smoking bong than a blood-filled chalice, the band’s lyrics, masterfully crafted, reveal that not only does the band hail the Dark One, but they do so more eloquently than, say, Beherit.
From “Black Valor” off of 2009’s Deflorate:
Do you show the standard of the six hundred sixty-sixth?
Will your flesh withstand the dawning of apocalypse?
Does your will it guide the spear that pierced the martyr’s ribs?
We will not rest till this rotten planet’s black as pitch
And from “Carbonized In Cruciform,” a song about crucifying nuns and setting them on fire (fuck yeah):
Unearthly ritual
Bloodlet thine human sow
In flames his face appears
Black intentions crystal clearAccept our sacrifice
Their blood will giveth voice
Carbonized in cruciform
Black inversion of the one called Lord
Hail Satan.
Though some dismiss them for silly reasons—the average age of their fanbase, the era in which they became well known, etcetera—the Black Dahlia Murder have proved themselves as a resilient and innovative force in extreme music. Their lyrics remain proof that simple descriptions of gore and Satan, while fun, are rarely as satisfying as well-crafted ones. Other bands should take note, and put in the effort in the hopes of accompanying their crushing sounds with words this damn good.
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Atrocious is indeed the right word for this continuing feature so far. 2 for 2 of really shitty bands.
Ha!
I love this post. BDM has awesome lyrics. They get lumped in with shitty -core bands, but are totally influenced by bands like Dissection and At the Gates.
“Who says “ebony” instead of “black”?”
Everyone in the porn industry.
BRILLIANT.
What, no mention of the absolute brilliance that is “I Will Return”!?
Great article. I am proud to call myself a fan of this band, especially since the quality of their lyrics and music has just ballooned over the past four years. They should have a new record this year, i think?
Strnad is definitely a talented wordsmith, with a very good grasp of delivery and diction.
I really like his use of differing rhyme-schemes (and half-rhymes), and the way he works them into his rising and falling delivery.
He has a real knack for writing quite wordy, quite evocative choruses and refains that STILL get stuck in your head.
Also, I’m actually quite surprised to see any mention of TBDM on IO, and await the forthcoming torrent of scorn with breathless anticipation.
ALSO – seriously, why isn’t Dissection the very first influence mentioned when talking about these guys? They’re pretty much their primary well-spring!
People don’t talk about the Dissection element because of musical atmosphere from which they emerged. At the time, there were tons of At the Gates-aping metalcore bands. The Black Dahlia Murder played melodic riffs, had short hair, and didn’t solo much, so they got pinned as “At the Gates-aping metalcore,” even though that description isn’t very accurate for them.
I admit I’m one of these folks who wrote this band off. This has inspired me to give them a 2nd chance. Thanks.
These guys helped me make the jump from Killswitch/Old In Flames into denser melodic metal which in turn opened the portal full blast later on. Great riffs, cool dudes, diabolic lyrics. Who doesn’t like that? “War Born” is my vote for best lyrics though.
Man. Poetically speaking, these lyrics are just crap. Stuff like “bestow me with infernal night”, “the wolf hath witnessed its mark” and the like are so run-of-the-mill in metal that I’m beginning to wonder if this is some elaborate post-modern joke.
I think maybe these pieces could’ve used a more explanatory introduction. Something like “Waxing Atrocious will examine the cool horror lyrics of extreme metal”, not “Celebrating great lyricists in metal”. If zombies and the like are your thing in metal lyrics, then that certainly goes well with the stereotype, but I doubt I’ll check out the next instalment…
Other installments are coming that will have a different focus.
Great. Also, I don’t mean to rag too much on the author, the pieces are well written and articulate, they’re just so contrary to my idea of good lyrics.
Whoops, that was actually me. But it’s still true!
I vote for Thou for a future installment. Bryan Funck’s lyrics can be a little abstract, but they’re obviously the product of a lot of thought.
I also really like a lot of Hammers of Misfortune lyrics. “It is too late too soon,” for instance, is a great line.
Not a Thou fan, but I’ve been thinking of doing an HoM one. Cobbett does the sweeping-epic thing better than the vast bulk of metal lyricists.
I’m not sure if Cobbett wrote the lyrics for Ludicra or not, but those are first-rate too.
A leftfield pick might be Dave “Dixie” Collins. In a subgenre not exactly known for its lyrics, he manages at times to be pretty funny. “Untied we stand. /Long live dirt weed! /Mankind is unkind, man. /God luck and good speed.” That’s like a stoner Alexander Pope right there. Also, he named an album _And Justice For Y’all_. Maybe heavy weed consumption stimulates whatever area of the brain is responsible for puns.
For future installments of this, I’d love to see a breakdown and analysis of maybe…Yob’s lyrics? There are a lot of ’spiritual’ tidbits and concepts in there I am not quite familiar with, and I think they are great lyrics. A little ‘guide’ to eastern philosophy in metal lyrics might be cool. Also, it’s Yob and Yob is pretty great.
Another option might be the band Cursed? I know they are more hardcore, but man…they have great lyrics. You could also discuss the use of samples and what they add or take away from the song.
Or, for giggles, try to analyze Absu lyrics.
Trevor has the best vocals I’ve ever heard but he did not fully write the lyrics it was all Brian Eschbach which is the true mastermind behind the band..